Now that is one heck of an over-used beginning. However, it can be used to produce one heck of a story. Oh well, it's not my cup of tea. So, here to ask a favor. I'm working on something new and can't decide how to start it. Here are a few of the contenders:
1) Baidrick tensed, seeing a man wearing the crest of the King enter the pub, clutching the unmistakable scroll that marked someone for arrest. (Something to that effect)
2) Avoiding arrest is never an easy task, unless you've had practice. Baidrick Keltner had a hell of a lot of practice. (This is the one that currently sits at the top of my outline)
3) Stealing? Definitely bad. Stealing from the wealthy? That's the bold kind of stealing. Stealing from the King? That's the stupid kind of stealing. Stealing from the King, making a pass at his daughter, and embarrassing him in front of half the neighboring village? That's suicide.
Have an opinion? I'm all ears...or eyes...since I can't really hear your comments.
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Hostess to this mad tea party:
- dark-huntress
- I'm nothing but a lone wolf, misunderstood and labeled to be dangerous.
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